Tuesday, October 23, 2007

grade me on

On my essay " Is Government necessary " I would like the teacher to grade me on my introduction and my body. I believe the introduction will get the readers attention and will explain to the reader what my body is going to be about. My body is good but I know I can give more examples. Out of my introduction and my body I would have to give myself a 3 because I know I could have explained it a little bit more.

2 comments:

T00tiS3 said...

Alright cuz I'll grade it I give you a 3. I have my reasons

Cornelius said...

like the way you worte this essay write more